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airin21
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hello guys!  this is my first fan fiction in english .well ,i thik that the title say everything...it will be something about love..fashion,,money...life...
now..who want the characters? 
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| Posted: 11/09/2007 21:26 Post subject: |
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 . I want the characters .
And i want 1sr part   |
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airin21
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| Posted: 11/09/2007 21:30 Post subject: |
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yeah.,. if i have another 3 comments..than i will give u the characters
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| Posted: 11/09/2007 22:15 Post subject: |
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| the characters ,the characters ...we want the characters |
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airin21
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| Posted: 11/09/2007 22:22 Post subject: |
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hehe:d another 2 comments:D and than i will give u the characters
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airin21
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| Posted: 11/09/2007 23:35 Post subject: |
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THIS IS ALYAAN.HE IS 30,AND HE IS SOME KIND OF DESIGNER
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THIS IS MICHELE.SHE IS 25.SHE IS BEST TIP FROM ALYAAN'S COMPANY
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THIS IS ROBERT.HE IS 21.AND IS THE BEST MODEL,MASCULIN
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SHE IS NOEL,SHE IS 21...MORE U WILL FIND FROM TEXT..
THIS ARE THE CHARACTERS..FOR THE FIRST PART I EXPECT MORE COOMETS
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Hostile_Flea58
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| Posted: 12/09/2007 01:15 Post subject: |
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| ^_^ maybe one of the characters should be me? it sounds like a good idea for a story |
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airin21
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| Posted: 12/09/2007 01:18 Post subject: |
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ok..devin..thanx for u;re sugestion but u are already in this story;) cause u are Alyaan:)
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| Posted: 12/09/2007 13:18 Post subject: |
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Uuuuuuu nice. Robert- i'm in love . You put the characters , now you can give us the first part  |
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| Posted: 12/09/2007 13:50 Post subject: |
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nice....
Robert -adorable :X
first part?pls
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airin21
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| Posted: 12/09/2007 13:55 Post subject: |
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i;m waithing for more comments:P..iso,,who wants the first part?
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| Posted: 12/09/2007 14:46 Post subject: |
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uh..i want to the first part ....robert is lovelly:X:X 
we want the first part airin ...give it to me babe |
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airin21
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| Posted: 12/09/2007 18:54 Post subject: |
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ok bebe..here u are:
...-Robeeeeeeeert!
-Yes,Alyaan.What's wrong?
-Do you know what is today????
-Hmm.. no..Should i know?
-You,idiot! today we must go in New York!
-Why?
-You,idiot! you don;t know anything?? Where is Michele?
-Home..
-Call her.Now!
-Ok..but please,calm down.
-Don;t tell me to calm down!
-Ok..ok...
-Now go in you're office and when you will be back,bring me Michele,too!
After 10 minutes,a skiny girl,but beautyfull,was sing in Alyaan's office.
-MIchele..Alyaan..said Robert..Sorry..but..
-It;s ok..You can go now.
-Ok..
-So,why did you call me?
-Do you know that we must leav at New York?
-O,no! again?
-Yes!
-Hmm..let me guess..She will be there,right?
-Well,yeas.
-Hmm..ok..what kind of competiton is it?
-Well,we have need of Angela,Cristine,Rebecca,Simone and Layla.Just them.
-Yeah,but Rebeca is in vacantion,and Layla in hospital...So..
-What?Hmm.. than choose another 2 girls..
-But all of them are in vacantion..jesus is Christmas,Alyaan.
-I don;t care! we must be there! i don;t know how ,but today,at 6 pm,u bring me all girls! u get it?
-Damn it...Why you don;t put Robert to find you another 2 girls?
-Hm..yea..tell him to came here..And btw,why didn't you tell him about this? that we must go to New York?
-Because i was though that this year you will not go anymore...
-You must be stupid to think like this.You know that i must win this time.
-Yea,,yeah..anyway...i go for Robert..
-Yes.
But in the clipă when Michel open the door,Robert was there ,ready to sing in.
-Alyaan..
-Aa..Robert..i was looking for you..
-Alyaan..is a girl here..she said that she want talk to you.
-Oo a girl?..hm great! tell her to came ..And btw,,at 6 pm we leave at New York!
-Ok..
-And tell Michele that she will be the 6th girl...she know what...
-Ok..
In 5 minutes,a girl was sing in in Alyaan office.She was like a simple girl,but very beautifull.She was like an perfect girl.
-Wow..said Alyaan..Who are you?
-Hmm...aa..my name is Noel...
-Noel..strange name...your eyes..are so grean..said him,looking at her.You are so beautifull.
-Hm..Thanx.So,you must be Alyaan?
-Yes.
-Thanx god. Well,one week ago i read you;re site..
-Please,sit down.
-Thanx.
-It;s ok..go on..
for another next i expect alot of comments:D
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airin21
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| Posted: 13/09/2007 22:42 Post subject: |
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ok,,i put u this next from yestarday..and i still don;t have any comment...y? u don;t like it ? juts tell me...y want this story? or not?
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| Posted: 14/09/2007 15:18 Post subject: |
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The characters are pretty cool... and first part is.. cute.. but.. you do have a lot of mistakes... :|
I don`t even get some phrases... it`s hard to understand... do smmth...
Waitin` for dah next
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| Posted: 22/09/2007 14:45 Post subject: |
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hmm i wonder...what i mjst to do? to close this fic? or to continue? is depend of u...so..if u want tyhis fic...just tell me...if not..i will close it;)
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